The Roof Beam Is About to Fall

[Writer Pilgrim by So Elite]

Love the twist at the end. Not for the people afraid of heights and flying! Gorgeous writing!

[Jonathan Potter]

Thank you, Pilgrim -- I appreciate your kind attention and the restack.

[Stanley Wotring]

Always stick it out to the end.

[Jonathan Potter]

Good advice, thanks Stan

[Lee Anne Collver-Richards]

Hallelujah

[Jonathan Potter]

amen

[Monica P.]

Hope springs eternal.

[Jonathan Potter]

that's a fact -- thanks, Monica

[Richbee]

Sky pilot.

[Jonathan Potter]

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sky_Pilot_(song) ?

[Richbee]

Sky pilot. Thanks for info. How high can you fly?

[mitch]

great writing my friend . Always stick it out , it can only get better . peace to you

[Jonathan Potter]

thanks, mitch

[Sea]

Beautifully written, and a glimpse of survival. Awesome, Jonathan.

[Jonathan Potter]

Thank you, Sea

[Sea]

You’re more than welcome, Jonathan

[House of Neglected Poetry]

Boy, do we need a good pilot to take control. But, as of now, one is nowhere to be found. Stalls away!

[Jonathan Potter]

Thanks, Mr. Lewis. Reminds me of that Sting song: "Let your soul be your pilot"

[Elizabeth Grace Martinez]

this is an exciting read! well done

[Jonathan Potter]

Thank you, Elizabeth